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September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully Written. I love How you went from third to first person. There could've been more detail about the sex part, but at the same time there was enough. I dunno. XD
Either way excellent job.
Either way excellent job.
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August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, finally. I wonder if maybe nobody writes a Seth and Eirika because it`s an obvious pairing or because Yaoi is "in" now. While I do love a good Yaoi I also love heterosexual couples as well.
I love how you used inspiration, while it might seem obvious you would get inspiration from it some people just push it aside because it is so obvious, from their support conversation 'A'. It really adds to the story and I feel without it it would seem incomplete so well done.
That aside, I also love how you kept in character and in time period. While it is noted it`s only a variation of the "olden` days", all the women would be shunned for being in a war--if not that then for wearing pants and showing their ankles--they do use proper English, at least the English translated games, and not our everyday slang which is what sometimes makes me mad with stories.
All in all, even though it`s a oneshot I feel it fileld my curiosity then more then half of the lengthy fanfictions out there! It gets rather annoying but I applaud you on your writing skills. Keep it up. ^^
P.S- That`s my Silver Medal pairing in the game. The Gold Medal being Cormag and Artur, since their support is so cute, and the Bronze being Innes and Ephraim--even they don`t have a support conversation they are just too sexy to resist. XD
~*Koala*~
I love how you used inspiration, while it might seem obvious you would get inspiration from it some people just push it aside because it is so obvious, from their support conversation 'A'. It really adds to the story and I feel without it it would seem incomplete so well done.
That aside, I also love how you kept in character and in time period. While it is noted it`s only a variation of the "olden` days", all the women would be shunned for being in a war--if not that then for wearing pants and showing their ankles--they do use proper English, at least the English translated games, and not our everyday slang which is what sometimes makes me mad with stories.
All in all, even though it`s a oneshot I feel it fileld my curiosity then more then half of the lengthy fanfictions out there! It gets rather annoying but I applaud you on your writing skills. Keep it up. ^^
P.S- That`s my Silver Medal pairing in the game. The Gold Medal being Cormag and Artur, since their support is so cute, and the Bronze being Innes and Ephraim--even they don`t have a support conversation they are just too sexy to resist. XD
~*Koala*~