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May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! Please update soon! I love this!
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February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice story, SubBax. Maybe a little short, but great scenario and descriptive writing. Keep going. Try doing something similar to what you did with your other story: draw things out a bit - more situations, more chapters etc. That whole sexua massage interogation scene was good - why not try the same thing with Lara
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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very well-written so far. There is a lot of potential here, and I hope you do continue with a long and enjoyable story. I look forward to see what will come next and eagerly await the rest of the story.
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September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you Streti for the info. I was wondering about that. And thank you all for your reviews. I am trying to make this story as long as I possibly can, and get it onto the site as quickly as I can, but I have had a lot to do. So I apologize if you're waiting a while to find out what happens to Lara and the three guards next. I promise as soon as the next chapter is finished, which should be within the next week, it will be uploaded. Thanks again.
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August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. Good to know that ancients stone guards still have the decency to give their visitors a good fuck and a shower of sperm.
By the way, you can respond on the review page by writing a "review" yourself, just click the review link at the bottom of the story.
By the way, you can respond on the review page by writing a "review" yourself, just click the review link at the bottom of the story.
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August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A new Lara fic! So far it is very promising and well-written, I will be keeping tabs on this one!