rate_review Reviews

Fan-fucking tastic. Finaly someone has the gal to write a decent tentacle story. Mind you mind was just for what I do best, randomness. For the subject matter, writing style, as well as the story itself, you my friend have garnered a 10 out of 10 on the Ivan scale of ratings. Congrats.

Not really anything else to say, keep up the good work? I'd hope so. Anyways, untill next time, semper phi, carry on...

Hey thanks for the review Brian, and thanks Dave again for putting out the challenge, I think this story came out quite well even though I know this won't be as well read as most of my other fics.

I didn't think it was possible for someone to make a realistic, tentacle sex story, but you pulled it off quite nicely. Two thumbs up b-.-d

@ Dave: Glad you liked it! Although judging by the amount of hits its got so far it seems that not many people are seeking out Metroid fics which is a shame :(

The story would be better if you use the web paragraph format (ie. separate them with blank lines instead of indents).

Otherwise, it's decent. Three plusses from me.

Thanks so much for writing this. Awesome story, great style. You have a new fan (one who'd like to see a sequel BTW)