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for Dawn Rising

by Naeblis1963

person DeOnn Norton
schedule June 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
When are you going to put yaoi in the?
person Vanessa
schedule November 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering could u do a Yaoi ff story next
person Anon
schedule May 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Could you do Ike x Soren next?
person Agravain
schedule June 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Excellent to see the update! Especially with Mia, my favourite female character in any FE. I hope to see moar Mia/Ike.

Lovely work.
schedule March 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's a shame that a great story like this hasn't been updated in a while, but I don't want to rush perfection. If it's not to much to ask, could you try a Titania/somebody scene? There is a suprising lack of fics involving her.
person fantome1
schedule January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant. Personally, I prefer Ike/Elincia but that could just be me (I haven't played radiant dawn yet, jut PoR). Also, LOVED the laguz chapter, I'd love to see a laguz/human chapter. Maybe Ike/Lethe?

Its a shame you don't like babyz though. Maybe you could just mention impregnantion, kids and cliche happy endings (I love em), rather than actually show the kids?

Anyway, Five Stars, please update soon.
person mogroxit
schedule October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to this great fic and Ike's return to the saddle.
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
RAWR.

hahhaha, I really enjoyed that chapter, and I can really see that happening... the whole laguz orgy thing anyway. Still, it was fucking hot, and very well played out. Excellent chapter
person thisisad
schedule June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see this fic still updated, and love the new chapter. Lyre can't get enough love. Felt a little disappointed that you cut the chapter right before round three started, but what can you do. Looking forward to more, especially with laguz mating season rolling around (great idea, I should say).

One blunder I caught though, about Skirmir's "foot-long inch dick". Gotta remember to edit the surrounding words when you make a word choice change. :P
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is turning out to be quite the amazing lemon and I hope it continues. Truly I'm holding out for an Ike/Lethe pairing in the future there's not enough of that around...and it's my favorite pairing to...

Anyways keep up the good work