rate_review Reviews

I love the way you wrote them both.
I really like how you make Phoenix worried and that all for his first time, it seemed to be realistic.
Great work.

I actually thought this was kinda waffy and cute, with how edgey boy 'reveals his feelings'

the endings made me go 'awww' and stuff...but the lemon confused me at the end. I'm like 'how did he like...' but I decided to just kill my brain and say the hell with it. Besides like one part it was still...be coming (no damn pun intended!)

still make more of this hot pairing (ho ha for gay lawyers)