rate_review Reviews

"A/N: I feel like this story is a lot worse than Engulf and it's not exactly a pairing I like to write, just one that I thought would be easy. It was easy, and therefore didn't turn out very good. So please bear with me; I know I should've spent more time on it. I finished it late one night this month just for the sake of it because I started it a loooong time ago and had to get it out of the way! I'm so so sorry if you're disappointed, but just let me know what you think!"

Excellent story. I think Tear x Luke pairing is taken for granted and making erotica out of any subject isn't as easy at it looks (kudos to you for writing this even if they're not your favorite couple) and for the most part there are actually fewer stories of them together compared to male/male pairing.

I actually enjoyed this more than the Jade x Tear story. Both stories were well written though.

O.O

.....god damn, that was hot.