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June 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! Well, that was certainly worth the few minutes it took to read. Honestly I love these two as a pairing and was pleased with your take on it. It was short but very much appreciated, thank you. KTN
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March 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very stimulating read. It's nice to have fics like this sometimes. Porn, you know? lol, I sound like a perv. =P
It's very interesting that even though this is slash, you make a point just how masculine these two are. Instead of describing Luke as beautiful and feminine as a of of writers do sometimes(myself included) you pointed out his broad shoulders and his Adam's apple. And likewise Layton is very masculine here as well. I like the idea that not so much femininity is involved. It makes it sexier in its own way.
And so Luke finally got to see Layton without his hat. That's a great victory! And it's so cute how future Luke missed him so much. Bad future Layton! Bad!
P.S. I haven't really finished the third game yet so I'm sure there's a ton of plot twists I'm missing. Like is evil Layton really that evil? I don't know? But I'll find out for myself soon, I suppose.
It's very interesting that even though this is slash, you make a point just how masculine these two are. Instead of describing Luke as beautiful and feminine as a of of writers do sometimes(myself included) you pointed out his broad shoulders and his Adam's apple. And likewise Layton is very masculine here as well. I like the idea that not so much femininity is involved. It makes it sexier in its own way.
And so Luke finally got to see Layton without his hat. That's a great victory! And it's so cute how future Luke missed him so much. Bad future Layton! Bad!
P.S. I haven't really finished the third game yet so I'm sure there's a ton of plot twists I'm missing. Like is evil Layton really that evil? I don't know? But I'll find out for myself soon, I suppose.
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July 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awful? Dear god, how could you call this awful! I don't even like Legal Luke and this story was just... unf hot and fantastic and yesssss.
And I loved Layton's little moment of almost thinking of a puzzle it reminded him of... before Luke quickly brought him back to reality.
And I loved Layton's little moment of almost thinking of a puzzle it reminded him of... before Luke quickly brought him back to reality.