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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Again, a solid sex scene. But, again, not much else.
Also, on the nitpick-y front, I'd suggest you don't refer to Hana's strap-on as her cock all the time. For one thing, there are other words you can use for penis simply for the sake of variety and for another, an incautious reader might think this is a dickgirl fic when you don't intend it to be.
Also, on the nitpick-y front, I'd suggest you don't refer to Hana's strap-on as her cock all the time. For one thing, there are other words you can use for penis simply for the sake of variety and for another, an incautious reader might think this is a dickgirl fic when you don't intend it to be.