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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You've received nothing but positive feedback, now update it you prick.
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December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gotta love Marine/Imp action. Two thumbs up!
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November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Do you read these reviews? Because if you do then read this: MORE HELL'S BITCH. I hate it when an author has a great idea and lets it die, it's even worse when the story is well written. Please do something with your story, I'm begging you. Oh and make sure it has a nice happy ending for the marine and the imp. Or not, do what you want just so long as you update your story.
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story, though I get the feeling that this story will die a quiet death and will never be continued. Well I want more, this is the type story I love, a demon with a "softer-side" it's perfect. Please update.
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July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
perfect. this was so wonderful in so many ways. I absolutley loved it, I never knew people with so much talent wrote this type of literature.
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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well done I look forward to seeing where you go with this