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for Spicy Cinnamon Apples

by LonelyCandyAngel

schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe that there are no reviews yet..how sad. I guess I'm the first then, yay!
I think it was REALLY well written, and I would like some more. I loved your Zelos, it seemed so much like him. For the female character, I kept on shoving Sheena in there since whenever I read I need a mental picture in there so I can understand what is going on.

Anyways, I really think you should make more!