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for Runaway

by NineTailedMistress

person Tall tree-san
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY, another update!! Keep it up, and the good work XD!
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH! So Cloud is the brother :D That clears it up more. AGH Riku, no~ You're being such a BITCH. Accept Sora! :B I would...heeheehee //^^// And Roxas, I'll love you even if you can't turn into a werewolf.

Thanks for the revelations! I'm supah happy this has updated! Thanks!
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting . . . . that . . . didn't go the way I expected . . .

Weak bloods, huh? . . . Yeah, different, very different.

I'll stay with this. I wanna see how else I'm wrong. ^_^
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Still interesting, still cute. Still following this.

I'd have to say that every chapter you seem to get a little better with your writing, which is good.

I have to say I like the fluffy, airy style of your setup, and I can't wait to see what will happen now that you've introduced the horror element. Mmm, horror romance, very nice.

And Don't Think I've Forgotten That Sora Bit (nibbled) Riku In The Prologue! . . . Unless that won't infect him . . . oO??

Just keep going with this. See you next time!
person Ireyon
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God, this is rich. Poor Riku, he's in for trouble. And the mental image of Sora cuddling with a grouchy and sleepy Riku after he woke up was simply hilarious!
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WAH! you did not just leave off there, did you? I can't believe it, it's such a good place to leave us but it makes me want to scream :O I must know Riku's reaction, personally I would just burst into laughter ;D And so..did I hear that right? Leon is Sora's brother too? so you can be engaged to your brother in the pack? how interesting! :B

I hope that this is updated soon because I'm standing on the edge of the cliff and either you make the bridge to the next chapter of I'm stuck on this edge till you update, there's no going back for me now :]
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very cute so far, but it almost feels like you're just casting Sora and Riku in the roles of Mitsou and Hasunuma/Mikuni respectively (maybe Riku is more like Hasunuma/Ichi, but still). I don't know if that's what you were intending, so I just thought I'd give you a heads up.

Right now I'm just wondering how the lycanthropy is going to play into this . . . I know that you have to work up to it, so I'm all ready to wait, but right now I still don't have much to say past, 'this looks fluffy and promising.'

So . . . . keep going with this. I'll be watching.
person Tall tree-san
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. Can't wait for more :)!
person Ireyon
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This seems to have potential, the story is still developing, but I think this will turn out to be great. Keep up the good work.
person SuicialTreefrog
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sweet!
TT-TT
i wish the chappie was longer
oh well!
i will live...that is...if you keep going?