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for Runaway

by NineTailedMistress

person RedSpade
schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that this was a very interesting read. I enjoyed the story and the way you used the characters. I am looking forward to the next installment, I hope it comes soon!
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS!!! You made it to the end! Well done.

Ah, I must say that my spirits dropped when you said (last time) that this story would end with the smex chapter. So many stories do that, and the readers are left wondering what comes next. I was thinking that up until I noticed how long this chapter was, and I started to really read. The brisk--not too brisk--pacing was the first hint that I'd guessed wrong.

And once again I am pleasantly surprised to have been wrong in my assumptions! I thank you for showing what happened after the first time they mated, and teh beh-beh (baby)! This was a real treat, as always, but it was extra bubbly and tender and wonderful.

Gotta say that I noticed that this last chapter looks like you spent a great deal of time on it, what with the near perfect grammar and spelling. I'm glad that you took the time to make this chapter the best you could, because it shows. Flawless in it's beauty.

Thank you for writing this. I'll be sure to keep an eye out for the other two stories.
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was amazingly surprised when Riku asked Sora to marry him ^-^ Thanks for that~ AW, I'm sure the birth of their baby made them extremely happy 8D
person Gnat
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! And I can't wait to read LeonxCloud and AkuRoku!
Though I must admit, I was a bit disapointed that Demyx wasn't with Zexion. But all the same, the story was great. You did a great job!
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, interesting, interesting!

Once again, you don't do what it is that I think you'll do, which is what has made this a fun little read all along.

Oh, I'm sorry to hear about all of your hardships. I had to live through things like that too with my work. ;_; Not fun. So I understand, and forgive the late update. (Not that I hold late updates against anyone, seeing as I can't keep a deadline to save my soul . . .. Oh wait, I don't have deadlines. XD)

So while I'll be sad to see an end to this story, I'm glad that I stayed for the full ride. It will be what it will be, and it will happen when it happens.

Until next time, good luck!
person lucky_meryl
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I didn't think I'd like this but I'm hooked UPDATE NOW
person SoRiku<3er
schedule September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love the idea of sora being a werewolf! it is such a cute idea! and i like were this is going, i would have reviewed sooner buy my friend just showed me how ^^!
person Lia
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting chapter. I always enjoy reading your updates. :)
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting . . .

IF, and I do mean -if-, you put in hints that Seph thought/thinks that Sora is a girl, then they were probably so minor, that people thought that they were typos, if they noticed them.

That said, I'm going to have to read this all over again to see how I missed the clues.

But while this was . . . . . . . slightly predictable . . . . it was still an interesting and believable progression of Riku's character. And I thank you for that.

So close to the end, I'll have to keep up with this. It's been a fun ride, and an interesting one.

I wish you luck on the next chapter. Until next time.
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving your story! When I first started reading it, I wasn't sure. But the more I read, the more I liked it. I can't wait to see what happens next, especially with Sora saying he's going back because Riku doesn't love him. But, I'm sure Riku does love Sora, he just isn't sure. Keep up the good work.