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Omfg! I love this so damn much! Like I feel really panicked because I'm scared its an abandoned story! Pls don't be. Please tell me u will continue?

 

 

Wow, this is an interesting start! There are a couple of hiccups in the flow of writing, but overall this is pretty good. ^_^ I'm liking the Heartless you created for this, and for some reason the voice, in my head, sounds a lot like the rat demons in the game Jade Empire. ^_^; Poor Leon, though! To get into some kind of terrible argument, and then all of this happens... Looking forward to seeing what you do with this next!