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April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love it when a guy who writes the same generic babble over and over criticizes an author who has talent. i'm sure hondo is glad for your important feedback streti.
this fic is super btw, the sex is good and not just "wham bam thank you maam" over and over again, theres some actual direction instead of it just being a fuckfest, its written pretty good...all it needs now is a few exclusive girl-girl scenes with human midna and zelda and/or agitha and it shall be perfect!
this fic is super btw, the sex is good and not just "wham bam thank you maam" over and over again, theres some actual direction instead of it just being a fuckfest, its written pretty good...all it needs now is a few exclusive girl-girl scenes with human midna and zelda and/or agitha and it shall be perfect!
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April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy inoffense, anon! Maybe I should go around "criticizing" more stories to get more critique of my own! I assume you are one of the many who always reads the latest "generic babble" and racks up the hits but doesn't bother to review...
I leave it to Ookami to reply to my observation or not, you need not rush to the defense of the simplest prod. You have a limited view of reviews.
I leave it to Ookami to reply to my observation or not, you need not rush to the defense of the simplest prod. You have a limited view of reviews.
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April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this was worth the wait.
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April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"It should have been one more round, but it spanned to ten. After Link treated Midna to the most enjoyable hour in her entire life..."
Ten rounds, and just one hour? That doesn't put Link in very admirable light, actually. Was he shooting blanks most of the time?
Ten rounds, and just one hour? That doesn't put Link in very admirable light, actually. Was he shooting blanks most of the time?
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January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please, Please, Please continue this story, this is one of the better Zelda stories on this site and it's driving me nuts that you haven't at least updated it in so long. Please continue working on this story. Thanks.
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January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would really like to see what you have in store for the next chapter.
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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hot damn this is awsome.
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November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter.
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September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was a very well written chapter.
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September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was a great chapter