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March 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
good history hope to see more and you should include illia, but ill like to keep link, i dont like the rest XD of guys
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November 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely amazing! I really want to compliment two things done incredibly well. The first is that your actions scenes -Link's battle in the caverns and Quill's fight against the thieves- are very well paced; you manage to fit in enough imagery to make it real while keeping a quick enough pace to make it exciting. The second part I have seen done well even more rarely: you keep the sexuality romantic and loving even when the by-most-accounts-more-deviant actions are taking place. Especially in the case of multiple lovers I don't think I've ever seen sex still convey the intimacy and passion of lovemaking. This work is absolutely excellent and I cannot wait to read more.
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June 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
'Four sensational hours and a variety of 66 positions later...'
That's rather dangerous and physically straining for Agitha considering it was her first time.
That's rather dangerous and physically straining for Agitha considering it was her first time.
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February 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The latest chapter seems good, but the formatting for the previous ones is so condensed that I honestly can't read them. I'd suggest that you try to get them back up reformatted. Also the puppy-Link thing could have been expanded into good roleplaying for the two (or three) of them. Consider it for the next chapter?
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February 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A bit long-winded, but otherwise very cool.
Also you need to reformat all your earlier chapters.
Also you need to reformat all your earlier chapters.
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May 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
God I love this movie
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July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Write more, I'm curious to see what happens next. You've got a great style--very evocative--and the fetishism is well done. Keep it up!
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March 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's good to know that the story isn't abandonned, I can't wait for the big event.
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May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yeh i love it, you dont see midna enough.
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May 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hondo, it could be that I'm misinterpreting what you mean by "ten rounds", but the troubled indication is that Link is like a young teen boy, so sensitive that he climaxes from very short provocation, and worse, several times in a very short time without even building up stamina to last longer on successive turns. It brings to mind an inexperienced, uncontrolled teenager, even if a tireless and very eager one. But whether you want to make this sort of an impression, I'm not sure.
As for the 'shooting blanks' question, that was specifically to seek your interpretation of what happened and what exactly does that 'ten rounds' mean. A frank question maybe, but specifically to ask about your own impression of the scene in the story. If you want to give the impression of Link as an inexperienced yet highly enthusiastic teenager, there is no problem with that, it just needs to be brought out better to avoid a clash as the rest of the story seems to set different expectations.
As for the 'shooting blanks' question, that was specifically to seek your interpretation of what happened and what exactly does that 'ten rounds' mean. A frank question maybe, but specifically to ask about your own impression of the scene in the story. If you want to give the impression of Link as an inexperienced yet highly enthusiastic teenager, there is no problem with that, it just needs to be brought out better to avoid a clash as the rest of the story seems to set different expectations.