rate_review Reviews

And you had the balls to call my story cliched??? Darling, I'm a hundred times the writer you are, or ever will be...

I absolutely adore your sense of humor....."Whorelock" made me laugh out loud.....And then remember how much I HATE them....But really really good story.....Bravo!

Dir, when are you going to update? lol I lvoe this, I want to see the Orcess bring your boy to his knees a bit hehe, love some of that cockiness out of him (scuse the pun) And yeah, this has HEAPS of story line in it, you can't finish here!

hahah you dag :p I've done things like that before too but I to the story...I like the little changes you've mad for sure! It's really good Dir, and I like how he gave her the choice at the end. I mean, she has to take him up on the offer doesn't she? Otherwise there'd be no story...but I can't wait to see 'how' she makes her choice. He is such a turd! I hope she gives him a run for his money :P heheh *cracks whip* get to work!