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October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting so far. I'm intrigued as to what happens next!
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April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Not bad; your storytelling and writing style are both good. However, you are doing a little bit of lore butchery, as Blood Elves did not have paladins until after the gate to Outlands, etc etc (i.e. the start of the Burning Crusade), and depending on how long ago the flashback was, their race was also not part of the Horde (again, a recent development).
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March 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! And update! I was hoping that the first chapter wouldn't be all there was of this! (Sorry, I'm more of a lurker who is too embarased to comment on anything...)
I like it; and it's interesting how you develop the relationship between Sprin and her cousin.
I like it; and it's interesting how you develop the relationship between Sprin and her cousin.
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
By the time I was halfway through chapter 1, I was happy I had decided to read this story. You have a knack for catching the eccentricities of characters that makes them real. Even better, you do it in a subtle, real way. Besides that, the premise is a very good start that has limitless potential. I hope you take the time to write more, it would be a shame to see this piece not realize its potential.
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June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This made me laugh...
Before I remembered the horrible ass raping I got as a lowbie mage there. Then I was like, 'Yeah, I did that too...' and with a resigned sigh I decided to review.
It's fucking brilliant! AND I CURSE A LOT TOO! AHAHAHA!
At any rate I hope that she doesn't get killed. Or Agarid Dragonfist will be comin' to town... and ganking the mobziz... Woot... I <3 the story.
"The -ENTIRE- Guard Squad." That made me giggle like a girl. And I R MANLY!
Before I remembered the horrible ass raping I got as a lowbie mage there. Then I was like, 'Yeah, I did that too...' and with a resigned sigh I decided to review.
It's fucking brilliant! AND I CURSE A LOT TOO! AHAHAHA!
At any rate I hope that she doesn't get killed. Or Agarid Dragonfist will be comin' to town... and ganking the mobziz... Woot... I <3 the story.
"The -ENTIRE- Guard Squad." That made me giggle like a girl. And I R MANLY!
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Freaking brilliant! What a cocky little shit that kid is! lol I hope she puts him in his place but back to the story, I really, really liked this. I liked how they contemplated what was actually going to happen to her, eg discussing the possiblity of a political prisoner exchange, it was realistic and leaves me wondering what's going to happen to her since it's obviously not going to be another 'sex slave' scenario...which is all good too, I mean, I kinda like that story line myself hehe. But no, that was really really good. I can't wait to see how this pans out and your writing is brilliant. Clear, concise, I could see everything rolling through my mind like a movie. Really very very good. Hanging for more :D