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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome to see another chapter in, and at long last Leon kicks ass for great justice once again (god I need to play that game again now... dammit)
As always, continue the great story (though I was confused by Leon's "soft reply" at the end, maybe I'm just reading it wrong)
Max
As always, continue the great story (though I was confused by Leon's "soft reply" at the end, maybe I'm just reading it wrong)
Max
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September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is the best Resident Evil romance fic ever..keep it up!!
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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MOAR
need more.
need more.
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see a new chapters up in the story, my perseverence paid off :)
Can't wait til Leon gets back to protecting Ashley, and hopefully you get to write the next chapter quick.
Good luck
Can't wait til Leon gets back to protecting Ashley, and hopefully you get to write the next chapter quick.
Good luck
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September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is the best resident evil fanfiction I've read. Keep up the good work!
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August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Probably one of the better post-RE4 fics I've encountered. Nicely emotive, although it can get a bit bogged down in places. One little nitpick - RE4 takes place over a single night. Leon comes to the village in the afternoon, and he's leaving the island with Ashley the following morning. Just a small quibble.
Nice work so far, keep it up!
Nice work so far, keep it up!
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August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see another chapter up. Good plot development, I'm looking forward to them meeting, I assume the wait'll be worth it.
Couple editing things you might wanna consider:
In the beginning you have a few spelling and punctuation errors. Not many but one is all it takes to break me out of the story a little anyways.
Seems like you overuse the term "ordeal" in Ashley's bit.
lastly, it's tabasco sauce, not tobacco sauce :P
Keep up the good work :)
Couple editing things you might wanna consider:
In the beginning you have a few spelling and punctuation errors. Not many but one is all it takes to break me out of the story a little anyways.
Seems like you overuse the term "ordeal" in Ashley's bit.
lastly, it's tabasco sauce, not tobacco sauce :P
Keep up the good work :)
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July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, keep it up!
Quick note: actually after a mission, while giving a report on its success/failure, it's a debriefing, not a briefing. :D
I look forward to moar.
Quick note: actually after a mission, while giving a report on its success/failure, it's a debriefing, not a briefing. :D
I look forward to moar.
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The story is coming along quite nicely. I like the way you're building up the feelings between Leon/Ashley without them being in each others presence. Very well done!
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July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story here, nice emotions.
Beyond a few minor spelling and grammatical glitches the new chapter looks good. Can't wait to see where it goes.
Beyond a few minor spelling and grammatical glitches the new chapter looks good. Can't wait to see where it goes.