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October 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
We want more chapters!!
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October 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This series is simply the best ive read from this site. Too bad u didnt finish it with conclusion. I sincerely hope u make time to continue writing in ur spare time and give leon and ashley their long overdue happy ending haha
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April 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE CAN YOU MAKE MORE!!!! I AM DYING TO KNOW WHERE THE RELATIONSHIP WITH BE ;-;
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October 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I freakin love this story. The characters (espeacially Leon) are very convincing and the plot is.....wow. I look forward to the next update.
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March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Always good to see more of a story I'm interested in as much as this one. Thanks for the work on this piece and I hope to see more.
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February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"She seemed so lost and frail-- so womanly. "
Because that's how women are. Lost and frail.
*eye roll*
Because that's how women are. Lost and frail.
*eye roll*
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December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"REVIEW for more if you WANT it."
Here's my review:
This story had some potential but has a lot of typos and badly structured sentences. You repeat yourself a lot. Your paragraphs on their thought processes are reduntant.
But worst of all, there's nothing more vulgar than a writer who holds her work hostage for reviews. That's the one thing that ensures that I won't be coming back to read more.
Here's my review:
This story had some potential but has a lot of typos and badly structured sentences. You repeat yourself a lot. Your paragraphs on their thought processes are reduntant.
But worst of all, there's nothing more vulgar than a writer who holds her work hostage for reviews. That's the one thing that ensures that I won't be coming back to read more.
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November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
moar?
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November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Best story ever keep it up !!!!
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October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I <333 YOUR STORY. Your detail is amazing. And I love the plot. You're taking way too long with more smut, lol jk! But i <333 et!