rate_review Reviews

This story is simply excellent. It fits very well with the game, the memory loss is handled very well and it also has the extra bonus of explaining Ming's highly agreeable choice of outfit. And better yet to have a dual sex scene with such great characters that even the game hints at being together. The past scene is my favorite with Ming's exhibitionist streak and the great image of her breasts swinging in the public view of the window, and the detailed cumshot with an elevated sordid sensation. From the shamefully few Lost Odyssey stories, it's great to have one so well-written.

This was pretty good

Excellent story, very descriptive and arousing. I'd really like to see more!