rate_review Reviews

My favorite VTMB fan fic by miles. I was legit sad to see where it ended and will forever wonder what was about to happen next. You could easily make a living as a novelist, imo. Just...you know...finish this one first? :)

I enjoy this story quite a lot. It's more than a bit saddening that you haven't updated it in over a year, however. (If the date is correct, that is. I may be reading things way wrong, and if I am, I humbly apologise!)

Good luck with life and all of that. Your writing is refreshingly good.

Hesitant to what? I will continue my review when you continue your story.


-candlejack

Oh wow, this is good. I mean really, really, REALLY good. Your characterisation of LaCroix is spot-on, and your OCs are quite captivating (and I normally despise OCs). Emily makes for an interesting protagonist - there are a lot of aspects to her personality that make her seem all the more real. Your writing is also excellent; really had me glued to the computer screen a few times there, especially when LaCroix fed off of Emily. The descriptions are wonderful, and not too overly-dramatic.
There's a rather sad lack of LaCroix fanfiction out there (I imagine not of lot of fans liked him because, well, he isn't meant to be likable) so I've only managed to find a select few that are worth reading - and this is one of the best so far. I hope you'll continue to update, and notify me when you do.
ReaperRain

I was glad to see you pick up this story again, as I believe it's one of the best on the site now. Nice job with the subtle tensions. I find it makes me almost...
hesitent.

I was glad to see you pick up this story again, as I believe it's one of the best on the site now. Nice job with the subtle tensions. I find it makes me almost...
hesitent.

Love the update, very excited for more. Please update soon.

This is a really good story, I hope you continue this :)

Wow, quite impressive. I bet you were one of those players who did anything and everything that Prince LaCroix asked in the game quite graciously, am I right? ;) Really looking forward to the next chapter.

love it do continue ^-^