rate_review Reviews

Nice story! =)

Just like I told you the first time, you have improved greatly from your first attempt. Besides minor mistakes you have, this lemon was blazing hot ^_~ just like it should be since you have Axel in the equation :D Neither character really felt OOC to me and I'd have to say you are actually the first person whose attempt a lemon on this pair. All other hetero lemons for the KH series is mostly on the overrated pairs while the minor ones is on couples that makes me go and read Zexion x Demyx over it sadly.

I hope to see another piece from you, even though I doubt that will happen, and I'm glad to know two commissions I paid for inspired this :)

That was pretty good :D It has his drama moment with the whole not staying till morning...but at the same time it was pretty hot and I like the way you describe things, not to dirty but clearly points to what is going on letting you form a clear mental image xP Hope you continue writting lemon fics ^_~