rate_review Reviews

HEY! Nice work. ^.^ Uh, I'm writing a DMC Fic of my own, and it's kinda a unofficial part two to your story. ^.^ It's called "That Man", and I hope you can enjoy it like I enjoyed your story. ONCE again, GREAT WORK!

Nice. I wanted to be like a lurker and simply enjoy this story, but by the end I thought that to leave the author of such a wonderfully sappy story entrenched with just enough action to keep it spicy hanging was a crime against humanity. Great work. The balance was realistic, as was the characterization, and for that I can't thank you enough. Wonderful descriptives by the way; it's always nice to find the one story out of so many on a fanfiction site that one can actually tell was written by someone that takes the English language seriously, and by that I mean both spelling and formatting.

Once again, great job.

Aww, I was hoping they'd do it in bar. But the actual sex scene is exquisitely detailed. Good writing all around.