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Kyoot. Carth is sleeping on the floor like a dog hehe. Bastila wouldn't have thrown him a blanket. When Orin said she had more battle experience than either of them, and Bastila just stared, I almost wet myself. I like Carth attempting to be paternal with the "eat your veggies" heh. Mission and Big Z are cute too.
And I almost felt sorry for Carth venturing out alone with Bastila. Almost. I always thought it was weird that the outcasts just left...
And Carth wishes he'd just left with Orin when she asked hm? Starting to come around.
Awesome chappie. I wish your lappy luck, altho, I know laptops. They die. It's not fun.

Well I have read bits and pieces of this a few times but never as a whole. Well I did. Keep up the good work.

I almost died a little with laughter and happiness hehe. I liked the hormone line where she put it in a straight jacket and threw it to kath hounds. And how she's edging towards recovery. The bump on the noggin isn't good. And I'm glad she's not at all impressed by Asstila, mwa ha, and I'm hoping Carth with continue to chew her out heh. OMG. I can't wait for Canderous.

Omg. Omg. Sorry I didn't review sooner. I'm just so confused. Because she has memories, but are they real? Because she was Revan, could she have been a smuggler too? Or are the memories false? And if they are, why would the council give her those memories? So many questions.
Btw, I approve of the Bastila meeting. She's such a bitch. And Orin totally owned her.
How did you think of her name? Or was a random one the game gave you?
Also, I have trouble displacing images of the rape days later. It was terrible (in the well written way, you know?) and somehow worse since Carth somehow saw it.
Awesome chappies.

Big Z put his paw on her forehead? Lols, more like her entire face. Cute. Another good chapter. I'm excited to see Carth and Bastila have it out. I'm rooting for Carth heh. Thanks for updating so often, you rock.

Awesome. I know a fic is good when I can barely keep my reviews up with the chapters, and I'm still left wanting more chappies. Ek, sharing a bed. I have a feeling even the characters want to get laid (mebbe almost as much as I want them to) but I dunno if it's time yet. I'm super excited about the next chapter.
Also, Carth would totally have monogrammed pjs. It's an interesting turn to have MIssion run those errands. I always wondered how the hell you were supposed to do it all by yourself... And I'm wondering what those scars are, or if I know what they are. Hmm. Interesting.
Very good chappies. Take your time, and as always, rock on.

Very good chappies. I love that even when they're not fighting, they're still sizing each other up. And Mission said the awkward silence was better, and toward the end I was wondering whether she was right hehehe. And yeah, I always wondered why carth wasn't the one piloting the swoop...
And when the Twi'leks came in, with the last line, ahh. Very well done. It always seemed like more people needed a sense of humor in this game heh.
Awesome chappies.

Oh my. I never thought about where the loot would be on one of the pig men. *shudder* Carth would take offense at that, snicker. Eww. Did I mention eww?
I laughed out loud when Carth *poked* her head wound heh. I'd use the last of the water if I had blood in my hair too. The dewlap analogy was nice too.
As always, a steller chapter. I loved the subtext once more, and how it's not just all the game dialogue. There was a line that struck me as very sexual too. This one: “Hey, you inflict pain on me, then I figure I deserve to inflict some in return.”
But then Carth goes all emo and I was like, eh so close...
But yes, solid chapter. Can't wait for more.

I like how it's a slow process. A few comments here and there that aren't insulting and more of like, shocked revealations. The one about blue eyes, like that. Awesome. And this last chapter was a beautiful insight into her character. And Carth's. How easy his worry about Mission being a kid would mean, ef that, leave um here under the right influence.
Also, I enjoy it when Orin smacks Carth for touching, and makes me wonder whether she's the one with real trust issues, despite her lack of bitching it.
Very good. I'm uber hooked. I just reread your fic the day you couldn't update heh. Anyway, yes, rock on. Can't wait for more chapters, but don't rush yourself or your story.

I do think you've been doing wonderfully so far. :)
Just don't rush it if you aren't ready.