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I just found your story, please don't tell me you quit! It's so good!

Ahhh, Carth... looking for solace in the arms of the pretty Twi'lek mechanic. You KNOW that's gonna end badly.

XD I love this story! Poor Petey, he died far too soon. At least Orin will get her orignal killing machine back and has as good humour as she does! :D I totally love your story, though right now I want to hit Bastila upside the head with something but I imagine alot of people do too. I like your characterization of Mr. Onasi there, and that you're using both original dialogue and your own personal dialogue. I hope you continue this story, as it seems interesting and I wonder if Orin's dreams are going to continue to effect Carth and I like that he went to beat the crap out of the guy that tortured poor Orin. How long was she a Smuggler after the Jedi brainwashed her?

ha! Carth is going to get laid. Mission have a wet dream?

Why Carth... horny little emo soldier that he is.... Hah. I acutally really like the way you portray him in this, which is rare for me. I like the way you portray everyone for that matter... although I'm hoping T3 gets a little more limelight as the story goes. He's a cool little droid. Gets cooler in the second game, but he's still cool in the first.

Carth gonna get some tang.

Mission and Zalbaar! EWWWWWWWWWWWW!

I must say I just reread KOTOR for the first time and through 7 chapters Spelling and Grammer are not that good on my part. Thank god that gets better.

Hmmm Orin must be settling down if she didn't just deck Carth when he told to not threaten innocent people. I'd still wanna deck him...
It was funny that they went back without Orin when she stopped to talk to Bendak. Heh. Also, calling Carth floppy head made me laugh. It was interesting to see how Carth interacted with Janice, and how both Orin and Bastila were irritated. Heh. T3 is all cute in this chappie too, which is something I didn't think possible.
Awesome, keep up the good work. Glad your compy is up and running again.

nice. I liked the calm. Need to juice it up a bit again before you get off Taris though. The last two chapters are lacking action, alcohol, spice, and/or sex.

You, sir, are like some kind of story-writing GOD. This is extremely awesome. Don't worry about taking a while, as long as we keep getting stories as good as this, your fans don't mind if you take a week or two to write a chapter.

I just skip all unimportant jargon and events. Feel free to review. I think you should have Bastila tied up spread eagle and that little pussy ripped apart. I mean, she REALLY needs it to loosen up. That or gotten really spiced up or drunk. I say all 3.