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"She made an amendment to the promise she had made herself earlier; not only would she escape and kill every orc in this fortress, she would rape every male, then kill herself for enjoying it so much." hahaha, a girl after me own heart! I cracked up when i read that, too good!

nice cliff hanger too!!!

...and one more thing? MORE ORCS lol... um...for the older sister, of course, ruthless biatch :P

Where was the little bit about the babies and war crimes? I must have missed that in the intensity of the 'action'. I was thinking about where they were hiding behind bushes picking off orcs in caravans and really, isn't that what hunters are supposed to do?

I still feel sorry for them! Poor buggas, surrounded by all those randy orcs...I'd HATE that! :D

Wonderboy, well true, skinning Orc bebbies is a bit harsh but their men can handle it surely! :D

Looking forward to more chapters lol. and nah, centaurs aren't beasts if you look at them from the waist up :P

Dir: ... They deserved every bit of that. I may be a killer of men; but I have never killed civilians or children because of my spite. They can have far worse done; /spit War criminals deserve far, far worse.

And that's roughly my synopsis in my character's perspective. If it was FFAPVP they wouldn't be anything but a smear on his boot. Annnnd I might has some good Rp too! :D

Wanderingaddict, yes, ingame Thunder Axe Fortress is a stronghold for the Burning Blade cult, but in my warcraft campaign, Drugor and a few other characters of mine(who may or may not appear in future chapters/stories) took it over and turned it into a Horde fortress. I would have made it more clear in game, but it seemed to distract from the plot.

Anyway, working on chapter two, which will focus on the sisters 'comforting' eachother after their ordeal, and I've got ideas for atleast three more chapters after that which will include M/F/F, F/F, and beast, if you count centaur as beast, that is.

fawnheart! skinning orc children is not part of the "hunter thing" >.< bravo though! I'm glad to see more and more people are getting away from the "horde evil alliance gud *grunt* *grunt*" thing, except that Thunderaxe Fortress is actually a fortress full of Burning Legion cultists and hordies are supposed to go and kill everything inside it, so, you know, it's not actually a horde fortress at all and is full of evil sadist warlocks who hate shamans/good things/etc.

Great Story; well written and enthralling. Hope you update it soon.

Poor girls! lol. They were just doing their hunter thing!