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June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please allow me to express my enjoyment of your fic. Though I admit that I have never played this particular Castlevania, your characterizations (and a quick lookup on wiki, heh) have provided enough background where I can understand essentially what is going on.
I really do appreciate the effort you put into your first two chapters. There are times when I enjoy a quick one shot, but other times I really prefer to read an author's unique take on the characters or universe. Oftentimes I find that the build up, if properly executed, leads to a greater sense of anticipation for the rest the of the story (whether it includes NC-17-type content or not).
In both of your chapters you questioned your readers as to whether you should continue. I would like to suggest that you do, because you have already spent so much effort in developing a wonderful backstory, that it seems like an honest shame to just let it go. Please understand, that I have actually never written a review before (I tend to be very shy in expressing my opinions). However, I've read that authors really do appreciate feedback, and that it can encourage them to continue with their stories. And I would very much like to see you continue with yours.
I look forward to reading more of your work (I noted in your profile that you have several animes that I am interested in, and given your writing style I'm curious to see what you may have published) and hope that you have as much fun writing as we do reading!
I really do appreciate the effort you put into your first two chapters. There are times when I enjoy a quick one shot, but other times I really prefer to read an author's unique take on the characters or universe. Oftentimes I find that the build up, if properly executed, leads to a greater sense of anticipation for the rest the of the story (whether it includes NC-17-type content or not).
In both of your chapters you questioned your readers as to whether you should continue. I would like to suggest that you do, because you have already spent so much effort in developing a wonderful backstory, that it seems like an honest shame to just let it go. Please understand, that I have actually never written a review before (I tend to be very shy in expressing my opinions). However, I've read that authors really do appreciate feedback, and that it can encourage them to continue with their stories. And I would very much like to see you continue with yours.
I look forward to reading more of your work (I noted in your profile that you have several animes that I am interested in, and given your writing style I'm curious to see what you may have published) and hope that you have as much fun writing as we do reading!
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I liked how the two of them developed some sort of a pseudo-friendship immediately, as it seemed they would have under different circumstances in the game. One thing I should note is that it might be a good idea to try to have the characters themselves explain things like how Joachim could taste Leon's personality, through dialogue or thoughts, rather than do it from a narrative perspective. But I anticipate the next chapter.