rate_review Reviews

i haven't checked in a while, it may have been only 2 chapters but it was worth it
i never think to start my soren/mia stories from scratch and nothing
i really like how its going and can't help but feel sorry for Soren
keep it up and i'll be on the waitin

you can contact me via email if u wanna chat about it

This was a pretty good story. You should definitly put the black nights sword in her, alondite(possiable spelling mistake). All in all, this was written fanstatic. Please continue this story!

With much respect,



The Prince of Madness

I'm reviewing for Chapter 2 now.
It's good especially the escape but 1 thing i dont understand is-
how in the HELL did they get caught? :\
I seriously can't imagine Ike and Soren getting caught even if they were sleeping
but it's your story.:|

Oh and my favorite part so far was Mia slapping Soren in ch 1
I would PAY to see that :D XD

It did take a long time but I can't blame you. This is a hard pairing to get started but...
DAMN you did a better job than me!
It's a good starting point and I have the feeling it'll be a good story!
Keep up the good work!

PS You could read my story FE: New Emissaries also. I only have 2 reviews! -_-