rate_review Reviews

This was a very good idea :3
I'm glad someone wrote about it :]
Thank you!

Really well written. It's hard to find a story I can read through and be enveloped in without the distraction of repetitive words or confusing sentence structure. I like seeing these characters (despite that it's smut) being depicted seriously and not made laughable. I really enjoyed Dante's exit, or the exit in general, as well; it was very in character for him, and the last scene in the mirror was touching and a good way to close, though I wouldn't normally imagine Vergil being so forward as to blow a kiss. The only thing that really distracted me from the story was the line breaks that were probably meant for emphasis on words, though it was a minor thing for me.

NECRONONYMOUS~

Oh that was sexy i loved it!! =)

I LOVED it! :) Great job for your first smut. Hope you will continue to write!
Thanks!
TemenNiGru