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you updated! thank god because i wasn't sure if you were going to continue with this story or not. and its getting so much more exciting.
keep those chapters coming
xoxo
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OMG!! I'm loving it...& i just wove Sora!! I know Yuffie's hurt but she's still being a bitch! It's like she's trying to stir up things or something! Sending Kairi that text and taking it out on Sora like he stole Riku away or something...bitch...Loving Riku, Sora, Selphie, & Tidus though! Wakka's ok...i guess...a little 2 blunt to me...and I guess Leon and Kairi are just hurting...but yes, Yuffie's a bitch!! Loving the story though, update soon!!!!

Oh Wow! I was afraid you had let such a cute little fiction die. And that would have been a crying shame. Ah, but enough of that, now to reread the 1st 2 chapters, and then to start in on the newest one!

::Start note::

. . Hmmm . . I got that as of last chapter, so they all seem perfectly fine to me--with the way they are acting. I also know that as the story goes on, and everyone comes to terms with what’s happened that we will get to see more sides of them. So you have my sympathy, because I’m behind you on their acting out of anger from being hurt and confused and slightly happy that he’s back.

Oh! That’s one thing I should have mentioned . . You have a tendency to switch between past and present tense as you are writing, which is a not-so-good thing. Basically if you start in one, you finish the thought in it. So if you start a story in one, outside of certain dramatic effects, you stay in that one. . . . and since most stories are written in the past tense . . . .

::Reads Chapter::

. . . . Ack, still not much to say . . . I do like the implications you have going on . . . . the thing with Riku’s family. . . . Kairi’s reaction . . . .

Grr, I might have to lurk for a few chapters in order to build up enough to actually say something useful, sorry.

But you should still keep going with this! Good Luck, and keep writing!

holy archangel! im FULLY and COMPLETELY HOOKED on your simply BEAUTIFUL story your definetly on my LEGENDARY list!!!can't wait for more OUTSTANDING work.PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

awesome! it's turning out to be really cool! your doing extremely well for a first fic. It seems very original idea wise, i don't think I've ever read another like it and I really frequent the fan fic archives L*

xD omg. that was nerve recking for Sora.
and Riku's idea of telling them that? sure didn't go very smoothy. can't wait to read more. update soon!
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Uh, oops?

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This is wicked awesome! Incredibly well written, I'm dying to see more! Can you email me when you update? I cannot wait for the next chapter *rocks back and forth* Ahhh, what's going to happen?!

mizu-benten@hotmail.com

That was really good! Poor Riku...his friends are being pricks. Can't wait to find out what happens next! Update soon!!

I'z too tired to gives full review (or use proper grammers), but Iz incuregin' youz to continues with teh story. There are much with the potential here, and you haven't gone quite into woman ashin' yet, but that will all depend on teh overall reactions of Kairi and Yuffie, for Selphie seems teh most agreeable thus far. . . . Which is odd, and yet not, becuase she's a 50/50 chance of being a bitch or a hero in these kinds of stories.

Good luckz. Will b back. . . . .

::Falls over asleep.::

Interesting. I'd like to see where you go with this! Please update soon!