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OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I HATE KAIRIE!!shes such a useless rump of preppy ash and waste i certaintly hope sora stays strong with riku cause thats how im sorta like wich is funny too cus im a brunet like sora lol!!who knows maybe ill get a silverette knght in shinig armour too one day [sigh] aaw well im totally into your EPIC MASTERPEICE of story writing. your a born natural and should DEFINETLY continue in writing stories cus ima totally your fan!!! your on my now quite BIG list of LEGENDARY FAVOURITE STORIES FOLDER!!!keep up the immense beuatifull story!! update F.B.O.L.F.

*squees.*OMG!!!!! I can't wait to see what happens next! I have the feeling Riku's gunna take Sora to the dinner << >> just a reader's intuition << >>

This is a very good story so far. I like the idea and the plot line behind it (which is NOT cliche, by the way). And the mysterious about what happened to Riku is definitely keeping me guessing and on edge.
However, I would like to see a little more Riku/Sora and their happy interaction before Kairi and her evil scheme steps in, because it's been really heavy on the angst so far. I feel like you've dropped all these problems on them already without really establishing them as a couple in love yet.
Anyway, that was just a little friendly critique for you.
Keep writing. I shall be waiting for the next chapter.

My god kairi makes me angry. riku should just realise what a bitch she is and dump her!!
anyway, update soon.
ciao

OMG I WANT TO KILL KIARI !!!!!!! anyway i'm truly enjoying so far and i hope to read more on riku's time away please update soon!!!

Mmmm, more details in this chapter, fun, fun! Oh, and thank you for the heads up in your opening notes.

I'm glad that you're still working on this, because we need more angsty-fluff in our lives. . . . Okay, so really we just need more fluff, but still!

This story is familiar, but different, and thus interesting. So I'm glad that I'll be one of the ones in for the long haul. ^_^

i just read this through and its SOOOOO GOOD. the plot line is really interesting and the characters are so well written. but i don't like kairi, even though we're meant to sympathise with her. she just annoys me. but that could be the rikuxsora fangirl in me talking ^_^; anyway please update very very soon. i wanna know what happens next!!!
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Aww I hope you update soon, I felt like I was waiting forever for this one. I really hate Yuffie, she's mean a you know what, Riku doesn't need friends like that especially know that Sora's with him. Poor Sore he seems to be pushed into the background, I mean he's a part of Riku's life you think he'd have more input. Maybe it'll pick up later. Great fic, I'll keep an eye out for more.

A new chappie YAY! Thank you so much I enjoyed it! Hope you update soon :)!!

I love this story so far!