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for Another Beginning

by SaraJaye

schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Although I haven't played this one yet, I feel somewhat disappointed with this chapter. I feel like it definitely could've been longer than you had left it and I'm not sure where your headed with this Because of how abruptly you ended the chapter. I do like the way you paired the two however; I feel their connection and their love for each other, which means good details on that part.

Looking forward to the next chapter:)