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for The Best Laid Plans II

by giegie

person Python
schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Again, I loved it. It was just as wonderful as the first. Will there be more?
person Fenris30
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! :D Great continuation. It was all at once sweet, sexy, and downright naughty. I can so picture those two like that, as they got to know each other more. xD (The scene on the table was both cute and...whoa! at the same time. Nero enjoying his dessert...hehe!)

Hope to see some more!
person giegie
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much guys ^^ And considering I haven't played Devil May Cry 4 because of my lack of money and a PS3 (I hate new consoles x.x) I was hoping I'd be able to pull off their characters pretty well from what I DO know about them, so hopefully I got it right...^^

Anywayz, nah, it wasn't too too hard to follow behind Kazeninoru, she and I are good friends, so we typically work alongside each other when it comes to doing things like this, the only thing that was hard was trying to keep up with her massive vocabulary and immense talent for detailing things such as the actions and the characters thoughts over situations to make the two stories sync with each other...hahaha ^^!!!

But I'm REALLY glad you two liked this...and while you might not see another fic for the best laid plans in particular, you can be sure you'll see more from either myself or Kazeninoru in the future and stuff hehehe ^^!!! Thanks again!!! xD ;P
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It must have beena tough act to follow Kazeninoru's Best Laid Plans but you did it and you did it well. I can safely say that I am a huge DMC fan and with two stellar romance fics that feature a straight couple,I can't help but feel contentful.
Again,you took your time and slowly build up up the the point where ero and Kyire would in due time begin to make love again.

It was amusing that Nero didn't know what a peroid is. Thoguth that in the Order Of sword would discuss sex ed so their knights wouldn't be goign around igorant to the basic knowledge of females.

Nero is such a daring person. More than I had orginally belived him to be. I mean taking the arburn haired woman on the table like that shows he isn't going to wait any logner for some Kyrie pie.

Kyrie and Nero should get much more attention and romance written about them than Dante and Nero. Yeesh. Anyways,great story you posted here and I am wondering if you are planning on posting up anymore of this calibur. Take care



schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow...what a find! That was just beautiful, perfect. I had a smile from ear to ear when I was reading it. He is beautiful! God that was good. I wish I had something inspired to say but I don't. God. Perfect. Definitely marked as my all time favourite one shot. I LOVED it!