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This is a repost of a review that I wrote for the other hot fic involving Krogans here at AFF. You'll understand when you read it.

"Now that Mass Effect 2 is here a would love to see another one like this by you, or anyone willing to have a crack at some more Krogan lovin'.

I had the idea for a particular fic, but once again I probably don't have time to write it myself. Grunt, as part of his Krogan 'puberty', begins to get rather horny onboard the Normandy. Ultimatley, he'd end up boning Miranda, Female Shepherd or Kelly, either way it would be hot stuff.

Just thought I'd throw that out there if anyone would like to pick it up. Maybe if the games section on the forums isn't still completley dead I'll post this there too."

I did check the game forums, they are indeed still empty.

When do you update this? Its an amazing pairing I think!

Great writing style, although the plot wasn't to my liking. Personally I woulda had Wrex turn on his crew and capture F. Sheperd for a god one shot non-con, but that's just my twisted mind at work. I can't really see the romance between a Krogan and a human, but maybe I'm just close minded...

I could really picture the action as I read your fic, which is a great thing, as some less talented writers tend to jump around too erratically for one to follow or otherwise leave too much vague descriptions. Good job and keep posting

Isn't it kind of cruel to take such a hot pairing, write up a good first chapter, (but without any sex) and then leave it there? Almost sadistic, man.

Eagerly awaiting this one.

Very entertaining, though I am interested to see this go farther.

Just make it more evident that characters are exchanging words as sometimes it looks like one person is saying three different things.

Once again, a good begining. Slightly confusing, though that's probably just because I misread something.

I'm hoping you'll continue this one. (Too.)

Interesting start to a couple that could be very hot if done well. I will be watching for new chapters!