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for the physics of displacement

by asprosdrakos

person Meggiez
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You did an amazing job with this fic. Their banter was a very nice touch. Very smooth and just enough back story without making it annoying and tedious.
person Ales
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Don't know how to call such stories: yes, that's PWP, and that's short, and that's all about sex, but there is also so much more! A small PWP masterpiece, thank you very much!
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, this is so beautifully written!! I love how delicately you handle their relationship, but still, there is a sense of potential peril there. Very racey and yet tender. I sure wish that I could stop writing my stories in such an aggressive manner and start writing kindly ;). I used to write love stories but now I'm so violent! hehe. I guess I should post some of my originals! I'm going to have read some of your other work! Any chance you will write a Condemned fic?

KUDOS!!!