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January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It was a great story but the ending seemed a bit...rushed? or just off.
however I also feel that it left it open for another story *hint hint*
however I also feel that it left it open for another story *hint hint*
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June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done, please continue.
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
o.0
That was...unexpected? Kinda crappy ending there, bud. Killed the story for me.
That was...unexpected? Kinda crappy ending there, bud. Killed the story for me.
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahaha!! That was freaking hot!! I loved it! It seemed a bit rushed at the end though, especially after all the detail at the beginning, but seriously, that was the best m/m/m I have read in a long time. It was light hearted and sexy, I hope you write some more!