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August 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loving the story. please update?
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December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hate you, j/k where is the rest I want more so bad! I have never seen such a well writeen story before. You have the mentality of the guys down perfect. I have never seen such a skillful i love/hate you so much fic before.
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October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just love how vicious these two are. They make such a perfect pair when they're not beating the snot out of each other... Very nice chapter!
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August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is the most amazing story! I love this pairing (or anything with Torn!)
I hope you decide to continue eventually, I understand how hard it can be to continue these things after awhile, but I know that still recieving reviews can help too! :D
I love the love/hate relationship going on, and i didn't even notice the wastelander thing! I guess everybody mixes things up after it's been awhile :)
If you ever update again let me know (krimzonbabe@gmail.com) :D This story is kickass and one of the best on here!
I hope you decide to continue eventually, I understand how hard it can be to continue these things after awhile, but I know that still recieving reviews can help too! :D
I love the love/hate relationship going on, and i didn't even notice the wastelander thing! I guess everybody mixes things up after it's been awhile :)
If you ever update again let me know (krimzonbabe@gmail.com) :D This story is kickass and one of the best on here!
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May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woaah, such tention between them. I love to see how much they clash, yet are so entertaing.
I look forward to reading more if you decide to continue.
I look forward to reading more if you decide to continue.
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April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love how these two bait one another. Their interactions are fantastic -- tentatively being nice one moment, then hissing and spitting the next. Well, I suppose no one ever claimed budding love is easy! Looking forward to the next chapter :)
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March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
There are NO Torn/Ashelin fics out there, and then I find this gem. This is believable in the way both of them feel; I can't wait for when things get really hot and heavy and she has to admit her ignorance in the 'field.' AND it's spellchecked! GASP!
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Looking forward to the next chapter!
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November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, I can't recall the last T/A fanfiction that was this good. I due hope you continue, I have a feeling I'll be fan to the very end.
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's a pretty good story. I find Torn/Ashelin more interesting than Jak/Kiera as they don't seem like they're destined to be together and had far more in the path of their love. It's rare for me to come onto AFF and enjoy a story that doesn't involve any sexual content but you've managed it and that's praiseworthy.
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much! I've been looking for a fic like this in the J & D section. Usually it's just guy on guy stuff. I can't wait for more chapters, you're writing is really good, and I hate that there is just one chapter so far. Please continue this amazing story soon, I'll be looking out for it.
Kain =3
Kain =3