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I love it.I was totally waiting for Dante to snap, I mean, Nero's such a little shit! And you're right about how there isn't enough Nero love. There's nothing wrong with the twincest but come on! I like the idea of Dante with Nero more, it's like they were just made for each other in my opinion.

1- Dante looks the hottest in DMC4 and the look really suits him! I remember, before the game came out, how the fangirls were bitching about Dante's facial hair lol

2- Nero's just begging to be dominated and you can't deny the homoerotic undertones in DMC4 eg. when Nero wraps his legs around Dante's waist XD and I loved the scene where Dante actually did put him in his place.

I seriously can't wait for DMC5, you should definitely write more!

Very, very sexy. Well written, too, especially for not having a beta and you wrapped it up nicely.

That was so dam hot!! i loved it xDD

i'll admit that fangirls are so into twincest that they don't give Nero a chance but you can't blame people for not liking DMC4. the game itself was amazing but it was just too different too fast, just throwing in a new character like that and making him the main attraction (though Dante did have his share). Plus i know some people were bothered that Nero looks like Dante and Vergil, it's as if they didn't try and make him look different (I'm glad they didn't though, Nero is a hot piece of ass)so I think people have a right to complain about the game. I personally did love the game but didn't like that Nero was made the main character and that Vergil wasn't in it, strutin` his stuff like the fine piece of ass he is.
And i'll add this: this story was wonderful, your writing is wonderful and i love the way you made Dante love women, that's very much like him (though i think he acts more like a bi) The story was just hot!
So hopefully you keep on writing, you rock that much! Your smut is gold.

Yay! A Devil May Cry fic with hot Dante on(in) Nero action! I very much enjoyed this, and I definitely think that borderline consent works ridiculously well in this pairing. I love that you made Dante still into women--that's too much a part of his character to dismiss, and I think it just makes his experience of sex (of sorts) with Nero all the more interesting. (A mirror piece of this handling Nero's experience of this event would be really cool, by the way, though you did touch on Nero's feelings and sensations throughout.) Did I mention I adored Nero's revenge? Take that, Dante! I have only one tiny, nit-picky problem with this fic. You mix character POVs a bit--one moment you're describing Dante's sensations, and the next Nero's, with no cues that you're executing such a change. Generally, this doesn't detract in any way from the fic, since it's obvious what you meant. The rest of the spelling/grammar problems were barely noticeable, so don't worry about them. So, all in all, it was well-written, hot, and I love it. I hope to see more from you in this lovely, and under-represented fandom!

This is a great story, very well organized, and nicely narrated. I was looking for a Dante/Nero Non-Con fanfiction, and this one is the first I actually found (I really like when these two get violent during sex... quite hot, besides the consequences). I also liked the ending, with Dante getting all sorry for what he had done... and Nero's reaction *lol*. Please, keep writing about this hot couple...!! (oh, and sorry if I confused some words, I'm not english speaker).