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RHP: (sighs) I AM SO ENVIOUS OF KEIRA RIGHT NOW!

Willow: O.o

Dark Jak: !!! O.O !!!

RHP: (slowly walking towards Dark) Hey Sexy..

Dark: (backing away): You..stay.. far..away..from me! CRAZY FAN GIRL!

(RHP tackles Dark Jak)

Dark: (screaming like a little girl) RAPE! RAPE!! RAPE!!!

Willow: O.o Yeah, I'm just gonna ... uh, RUN! (runs)

Finally!!! It's been far too long that the Jak section of this site has been filled with yaoi of every sort. I've been waiting for over three years for a good Keira/Jak fic, and including Dark in the mix helped greatly. I know it's a oneshot, but an idea for a later chapter could be either Light joining in on the action, or the two conversing with Jak about the events.


Thank you for finally giving some het back to the Jak series

That was pretty sweet! I agree, it's nice to have some more variety in this fandom. I admit it, I'm guilty as heck of too much yaoi around here... I have ideas for other kinds of fics, but haven't had time to work on them yet.

I loved some of the funnier moments in this. The point where Jak stops short and Keira is just amazed and outraged and "grr! you jerk!" was too good. The ending too was very cute, all innocent-little-Keira eyes and "hi" while Jak has absolutley no clue. It's also really cool to see other peoples' takes on Dark Jak. I love fics with Dark where he's not just a brutal animal bent on death. He's positively bratty here. Love it!