rate_review Reviews

Okay, so you just HAVE to continue this series! I loved it, I really liked the two different POVs and overall your writing style is spot on. I think I found 2 or 3 grammar errors, but other than those you have one of the best writing techniques I've seen on this sight. My only suggestion for the future chapters is that you have another one with just Dante's viewpoint (he'd probably have a pretty interesting take on all this, lol!)

Let me just tell you now that if you do a DantexNeroxVergil threesome with the same level of OMG-that-was-HOT that you wrote this one with, I will build a temple in your honor.

I really like this little gem you've supplied for us perverts here. I agree that there's not enough fun stuff written for this fandom. It seems a lot of the stories in this fandom get too serious or too fantastical (I love twincest, but the DantexVergil bit gets old after awhile). It's good to see Nero get some spotlight, without that popular view (based on an incorrect theory) of him being Vergil in some way. The fact that it's well written is a great plus. Your description of what was happening during the short period, physically and emotionally, created a great mental image, without bogging the mood down via excess language. I hope you keep writing for this pairing in the future.

PS- I have nothing against Vergil fics (I read them too). It's just nice to see something else worth reading every once in awhile.

That was one of the hottest DMC fics I've ever read, I loved it!(Would love to read a Vergil/Dante/Nero threesome, or any other DMC stories you write.) I'll definitely keep an eye out for any more fics from you!^_^

Nice and HOT!! I really like it!!! Dante/Nero is becoming one of my favourites yaoi couples, as much as Dante/Vergil... so, a Dante/Vergil/Nero sounds good (I really don't like Kyrie, at all...). Thanks for this fic, and please continue writing about D/N... (I can't find a lot of good written fanficcion about this couple yet)