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October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. I'll start off by saying that I rarely review anything unless I REALLY like it. I began reading in this fandom and was continually disappointed by others' representation of Nero. Yours however, I found 100% more convincing and for that, thank you. Also, Dante? Sounded just perfect, bravo. Overall, this was a fantastic (and delightfully dirty) read. I'm really hoping that you continue this particular story, maybe including Dante and Nero's future "encore" Or at the least, write more from this series. : )
If your other story posted here is as good as this one (I'm starting it now) I'll have found another author to watch <3
If your other story posted here is as good as this one (I'm starting it now) I'll have found another author to watch <3
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July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm drooling.. and bleeding.. and I'm happy about that :D
WRITE! And I'll bear your children ;)
WRITE! And I'll bear your children ;)
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July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ha! Yes, that's exactly what I thought during the fight with Dante. "Wait a minute... this is a bedroom, right???"
Nice work on writing this story. You have a good style, and I like how you slipped this scene right into the normal game sequence without disrupting anything in the continuity. This really could have been a deleted scene.
Just one question... how could Nero and Kyrie have had regular sex before the game's events when she clearly had not seen his demonic arm until after the Credo fight during the game? It seems unlikely that he would be able to hide it during sex. I guess that's my only real criticism of the story. Other than that, rock on!
- Jen
Nice work on writing this story. You have a good style, and I like how you slipped this scene right into the normal game sequence without disrupting anything in the continuity. This really could have been a deleted scene.
Just one question... how could Nero and Kyrie have had regular sex before the game's events when she clearly had not seen his demonic arm until after the Credo fight during the game? It seems unlikely that he would be able to hide it during sex. I guess that's my only real criticism of the story. Other than that, rock on!
- Jen
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whew! I knew I wasn't the only one who got ideas when I saw those two in that room... I also had ideas when I saw the torture room in Fortuna Castle... but that's not important!(nervous laugh)
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July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A couple of things conspire to make this one of the hottest slash stories I've read (in the top 10, easily). First of all, there are things done and mentioned in the course of some seriously *hawt* sex that are unique to this game and these characters. Too often, sex scenes can have the names switched out with some other fandom and no one would ever be able to tell. I also adore the "two sides of the story" bit. It thoroughly explores the whole, er, situation and alows those of us following at home to get a complete, er, grip on whatbs going on. Yum. :)
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG i love this story it is sooo FUCKING HOT!! oh and you should write your story about Dante/Nero/Vergil cause eww girls x.x
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May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holey fuckin' shit that was hot as hell. [/blood dripping down chin]
Srsly man, that was great. I love the description, and the the.. THE SEX. And it was sooo not OOC like most of the Dante/Nero fics out there. Applause applause! ^^
Srsly man, that was great. I love the description, and the the.. THE SEX. And it was sooo not OOC like most of the Dante/Nero fics out there. Applause applause! ^^
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May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit...I thought your Castlevania story was good, that's it, Im buying DMC now too! And to think I was always a die-hard WoW fan :P This is brilliant. Seriously, even better than your other one and that was pretty damn good. I loved the wit you injected into it, it was sexy as hell and from start to finish I was hooked, and I especially liked Dante's little twinges of guilt and the reasoning when he said/thought 'half demon' here hahaha I got a chuckle out of that. I hope you do make more of this one, Hooked here! Nice as!
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May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know, Trish is a shapeshifter, after all. So if you find writing het too strange, that's easily fixed.
This fic is great!
This fic is great!
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May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice read - I'm not really into Nero but your story is so good that I forgot I'm not supposed to like him ;) The second POV chapter is a fun addition.
Anyway - no, you're not the only one who likes Credo. I also think he's an interesting (and good looking too! :D ) character with potential, so it's great that you're actually writing a fic with him :) I'm definitely looking forward to it.
Anyway - no, you're not the only one who likes Credo. I also think he's an interesting (and good looking too! :D ) character with potential, so it's great that you're actually writing a fic with him :) I'm definitely looking forward to it.