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July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I had to read this twice before I could respond. To echo an earlier review, the pairing made me skip over this story a few times when I was on the prowl. Just didn't sound interesting at the time. But then you updated. And I figured: why the hell not? So I read it. And now I can't get it out of my system; I almost couldn't sleep last night. I can't believe I never realized before the sort of high tension dynamics these two have—but some things are so obvious, they're easily overlooked? What they have going is incredibly frustrating, but horribly hot.
I feel for Hayner, because, ironically, I had the exact same... thing... going on with my childhood bully. He liked me. I liked him. He and I fought FOR YEARS. And everyone around us knew. But anytime someone tried to tell me, I would freak and lash out and insult him until I was blue in the face. I was just that scared that the moment I admitted it out loud, he was going to laugh, say it was all a joke, and hold it over me for the rest of my life. I'll probably always regret being such a wimp. I know Hayner is stronger than that. He just needs a little time to get his head on straight and lighten up a little. He's thinking too hard. Seifer is easy to jockey, as long as you know how to give as good as you get. ;)
I feel for Hayner, because, ironically, I had the exact same... thing... going on with my childhood bully. He liked me. I liked him. He and I fought FOR YEARS. And everyone around us knew. But anytime someone tried to tell me, I would freak and lash out and insult him until I was blue in the face. I was just that scared that the moment I admitted it out loud, he was going to laugh, say it was all a joke, and hold it over me for the rest of my life. I'll probably always regret being such a wimp. I know Hayner is stronger than that. He just needs a little time to get his head on straight and lighten up a little. He's thinking too hard. Seifer is easy to jockey, as long as you know how to give as good as you get. ;)
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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story! Please, please, please update soon! Pwease?
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June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
X3 crud, that was a great place to finish off the chapter! haha-'cure-all'. that's funny :] osh, Seifer is so cute when he's telling his feelings. I hope that Hayner doesn't go to school again so that Seifer will visit, thanks for the update!
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June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
m...
i like it
i like the originality in this story. Its pretty good.
I hope you continue hun ^^
i like it
i like the originality in this story. Its pretty good.
I hope you continue hun ^^
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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG MOAR PLZ. I want aftermath! Day after! "Howdy Chickenwuss, want more?" U NO! ^^ xD
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April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The first time I came across a Seifer Hayner fic. I thought nahh
maybe not something that sounds good. But I checked this anyway
and by reading this I changed my mind. So now I went back and read
the others and it's now one of my fav pairings from KH. ^_^
Please write more this is to good a story to end like this.
And I hope you get swarmed by plot-bunnies for more stories.
maybe not something that sounds good. But I checked this anyway
and by reading this I changed my mind. So now I went back and read
the others and it's now one of my fav pairings from KH. ^_^
Please write more this is to good a story to end like this.
And I hope you get swarmed by plot-bunnies for more stories.
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April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You...you...gaaaaaaaaaaah!
*Flail*
Dammit, as soon as I regain my sanity I'm going to demand that you continue this story!
*Flail*
Dammit, as soon as I regain my sanity I'm going to demand that you continue this story!
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay for ch 2! It was just amazing and hot at the same time! I cant wait for ch 3!
~MissLey
~MissLey
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April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Fans self*
Wow...I think I might die if you don't update this soon...
Wow...I think I might die if you don't update this soon...
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April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOH that can't be it! Eeeee I loved it. >w< I want moar plz. >D I loved the "Hot Elevator" thing. Hayner and Seifer are like, GOING TO GIVE IN!! ;D I want moarrrrrrrr.