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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i fuckin hate you! bitch, saying shit about me to everone! fuck u and ur sorry fic.
i didnt steal from you! lying bitch
i didnt steal from you! lying bitch
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June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, this was awesome! I really felt sorry for Tess having that dream in the beginning! As a guy, I know what its like to have such incompelted dreams. Their attitude was pretty refreshing from the usual OC/canon kinds, I enjoyed it. Its hard to find non-yaoi DMC pr0n, so this was a great break from the usual. You got Dante's teenage attitude pretty well, I can totally picture him like that now. I just finished DMC4 the other day, and now I keep thinking this would be a nice memory he'd look back onto, haha! Great work, keep writing.
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May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice well written fic! Sexy too, heehee. Poor Tess, I feel sorry for her, having woken up from such a hottie dream like that! The rest of the 'toying around' was fun. Dante sure knows how to make someone go crazy! The sex-scene was very yummy, I loved how she teased him. X3
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April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I am so impressed with this story! The length of their trysts was rather satisfying and very rare. The wonderful lack of heavy drama was a refreshing breath of fresh air too! Yet despite the lack of drama none of of the characters were lacking in development. Dante stayed well in character and Tess never stopped being true to herself. Without the need for promises of undying love both characters grow and find new confidence from their experience. This is a rare jewel! Thank you so much for sharing it!
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April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's very hard these days to read a well organized lemon that has a good story but falters in the acutal bumping and grinding. Well done I must say. The dalouge betwerrn Tess and Dante was magnifcant. That was quite the inteste and erotic dream poor Tess had. You also did not rush staight into the sex which is another plus. Sometiems it's advised to do so and other times not a wise choice.
Did I metion that was some of the hottest wild sex Dante and Tess had? And here I was thinking witches weren't much. This compelted story more than makes up for the wait until you relase the squel.
Did I metion that was some of the hottest wild sex Dante and Tess had? And here I was thinking witches weren't much. This compelted story more than makes up for the wait until you relase the squel.