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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing fic! You're able to deliver well thought-out action sequences AND sex sequences. You've also managed to capture the crew's personalities dead-on, and is that a renegade Shepard I spy? Awesome! lol
You've got a ways to go before the end, keep it up!
As a last question: Are you planning to add the fact that Shepard seems to go out of his way to survey everything in sight? Or even going to add some of the better side-quests? Or is this strictly the Main Plot only?
Either way, your writing is great. I'd love to see more chapters up.
You've got a ways to go before the end, keep it up!
As a last question: Are you planning to add the fact that Shepard seems to go out of his way to survey everything in sight? Or even going to add some of the better side-quests? Or is this strictly the Main Plot only?
Either way, your writing is great. I'd love to see more chapters up.
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August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a well written story. You describe the interaction (both physical and spoken) between characters very well. Can't wait for an update.
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August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter why not make a threesome with shep/liara/ash.
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August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fuck yes, you updated! Awesome chapter, a little skimped-out on the details at points but, hey, that's what playing the game is for, right? Good jorb, keep up ze good vork. :D
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story so far keep it up.
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July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dammit, my last review got erased somehow.
Like I said, this is a really good rewriting of the storyline. It's very in-depth, and the characters are very vivid and believable. :D I like it a lot. A shame you haven't updated it in a long-ass time, but hey, you really should. And I know this because...you know...I'm an author who...totally updates his fics...you know, just...all the time... ...I'm so totally not lying. >_>;;;; *cough*
Like I said, this is a really good rewriting of the storyline. It's very in-depth, and the characters are very vivid and believable. :D I like it a lot. A shame you haven't updated it in a long-ass time, but hey, you really should. And I know this because...you know...I'm an author who...totally updates his fics...you know, just...all the time... ...I'm so totally not lying. >_>;;;; *cough*
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April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fuck yes, you are the best Mass Effect adult fanfiction ever!
Keep writing, you do good work!
Keep writing, you do good work!