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by omega13

person Smiley
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Alternatives to tentacle? Hmm...

There's proboscis, but that term is more related to the nose/mouth rather than a sexual organ. Well, I suppose the mouth can technically be a sexual organ...

You could use 'prehensile length', though that sounds rather clinical...

Really, it all depends on the monster. I never played RE0 so I don't know what sort of creatures you encounter in that game, but Plant 42 in RE1 had vines, the lickers in RE2 had tongues, and the plagas in RE4 had...uh...those spike things? I suppose technically those would be tentacles. (Though, given that they have spikes on the end, they wouldn't be very fun to play with).
person Enchanter468
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
1.) Other words for "tentacle"? "Appendage", "limb" and (dare I say this) "member" come to mind.

2.) No spiders? Fine by me. While I like the massive arthropods from the Resident Evil series, they're...erm...anatomically incompatible with a human female.

3.) Does Billy deserve a scene with Rebbecca? As a Billy x Rebbecca fan, I HAVE to say yes. Besides, if she's going to be stuck with everything else in the game, I think she deserves at least one human sexual partner.

You've done a great job on the story thus far, and thanks for explaining that Rebbecca's not just into monsters. I've seen a few other fics where the girls (mainly Jill and Rebbecca) practically start disrobing whenever they see one of the bio-weapons. That's always felt unrealistic (to say the least) and I like your explaining that Rebbecca knows that this will allow her not to be killed, rather than having some weird monster fetish.

Anyway, keep up the good work!
person Anon
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sorry man but i have almost no recollection of RE0 my memory starts at RE1 otherwise i'd love to suggest scenarios.....it was a good move making the scenes consentual instead of a mild rape every time, it makes the story flow more smoothly...... i also really hope you do sequel fics i'd love to see what you do with the infamous jill valentine since you did so well with rebecca
person GenoLiger
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
1. Another word would be big,long,thick,and maybe branch.


3. I don't think so. Rebecca needs too have her own story just like now.

5. What about lickers,Crimson heads,Crows,Mutated Bat,The tyrants,Hunters,Plant 42,Chimera,The Centurion(The Giant centipede),and plague crawlers. The snakes and Mutated Bats sceane could take place outside of the Training Facitliy. The Mutated bat could be on the roof of the Training Facility. The Lickers could be in the Training Facility since there is alot of Crimson Heads.The crows could be with the bats. The tyrant could be on the elevater.The hunters could be in the Main hall.PLant 42 has too be in the lab since it can't move.The Chimera's could be in small hall ways since they are compact. The Centurion would have too be in a big room. Maybe one of the lecture rooms. The plague crawlers could be in that gear room right after they go up the small elevater. That's all I can think of now.I tried too limit myself too Resident Evil 0.

6. THere's not many Women heroines in the Resident Evil Universe Sadly.I would say Claire Redfield.I'm assuming your putting in Jill and Rebecca.
person sumomo17
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
come on man im waitin for the next chapter hurry up
person Em
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Part of me wishes I didn’t find this because now I am dying for an update and it has been awhile since there has been another chapter. Very well written RE story; I haven’t seen such a fluid and plausible story in a very long time in regards to this genre. I hope you update soon.
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I've only read the first two chapters but this looks extremely promising so far. I hate how some people let everyone get infected by the virus but somehow miraculously sex doesn't spread it. Great job avoiding that! And with a pretty plausible story too. You seem to have even remained in character with the characters, nice! I can't wait to get to Plant 42...and the snakes could be fun too. Though I might have to skip the spider chapter...
person Anon
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the leeches were a good idea to include it was just kinda of a short chapter though but i am glad to hear that you're going to include an original creature which sounds interesting and fun..... cant wait for the next chapter keep em comin

P.S i cant wait till you go on to the other RE GAMES RE2 is my favorite so i cant wait for that story to come ....it will be cool to see what you do with jill too in RE1 and RE3
person Krome300
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
These stories are great. I love monster/beast/tentacles on women. I hope you continue soon.
person Zeridaloka
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is great! I can't wait to read the next chapters. I hope that you continue down the line with the other Resident Evil titles. I know that's a long way off but I can only imagine the kinky situations you'll put the female protagonists in. Good luck with the rest of the story. :)