rate_review Reviews

I really don't blame you for skipping the scorpion sex, that would have freaked the fuck out of me too. The Eliminator seems a likely candidate for another lemon but that's not until you reach the Umbrella training facility. The Web Spinners... Yeah, that's creepy. On the other hand, there is a possible way to use them without sex being involved-Have the Web Spinners capture Rebecca, strip her, tie her up in webbing with her weapons close enough for her to use on them, but before she can get out zombies come along and bang her once again.

However, as a suggestion for the next three zombies, all I can say is: Gangbang, with bukkake action. Let Rebecca get her brains humped out and then rest a while longer. You could also demonstrate some teamwork between the zombies indicating that for poon, some of their higher brain functions are still intact. Plus, they are on a train-Might try some stuff you see in the chikan genre of hentai.

MOAAAAAR!

Brilliant, no complaints, thanks for it.

Wow, you really have a way with words. I don't even have any suggestions on how to improve, just keep up the good work. I didn't come across anything too confusing, but then again, I was so drawn in to the story that I my mind glossed over the little bumps.

And don't worry about begging for reviews, if anyone deserves feedback, it's you. I'm looking forward to more, especially what you'll do with the scorpion, since that was one of the more memorable parts of the game.

Chap 4 was good. Sexy and well described. I don't really need all the explanations at the end. Keep writing.
SailorNemesis

Well, I have been enjoying this story. Good job with the leeches, creatively done. Hope to see more from you.
SailorNemesis

How do I say this? This is a guilty pleasure, one not good for you in the slightest...like that seven layer chocolate cake you know you really don't need, but you eat it anyway. You have an abundance of purple prose, but I'm not going to slam you for it. Somehow, it fits the context; the language provides a gooey, rich passion to indulge in.

Besides, I have a fetish with tentacles.

M

This is a fantastic story that I keep coming back and reading again and again. You've got a really great writing style and I'd love to see more in the future.

Wow thats amazing how you detail not only the (humhumm)"acts" and all the organism descriptions without getting bogged down in the more mundane uninteresting points that might push someone away a story like this. I do like the progressing shifting of her state of mind thanks to the new hormones spreading through her.

I really respect you for the wonderful job you did on chapter 3 with the leaches. That seems like it would have been a near impossible "write" just to get the animal reactions right.

You seam to have a real gift with words that most of us can't even truly appreciate.

I'm sorry if it sounds like I'm gushing, but your really doing an incredible job.

This story is soo HOT! I really hope you write more!