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October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aargh...too angry, in chapter 2.
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May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think that you can go into a bit more detail with those scenes. They seemed rushed to me. Either way I like the way it's headed :)
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like where this is going and look forward to it fully. My only comment would be that perhaps it would be easier to read if you used smaller paragraphs.
Keep up the good work!
Keep up the good work!