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March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting Pairing :)
However I felt Cheated during at end. There wasn't too much detail about how Ilyana did the deed to Mia; You summed it up in one sentence...
Please don't do that ever again. Lol anyway I await your next one :)
However I felt Cheated during at end. There wasn't too much detail about how Ilyana did the deed to Mia; You summed it up in one sentence...
Please don't do that ever again. Lol anyway I await your next one :)
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March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A bit too short to be awesome, but it was great for its length.
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March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would ask for more, but I'm not sure if that would ruin the simplicity of it. It was pretty good, and you should definitely keep writing. If not this story then at least some more Fire Emblem Yuri because we can never get too much of that.