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(dumbfounded and shocked)What the f**k was that?

If thats what you really meant.. What does it mean? lol

Henry didn't only get STUCK inside Eileen, but with the absence of her vagina ("There was a HOLE here," -it's gone now-), he has become an inseparable part of her (and she is not Eileen anymore but a dog monster). And there's no way out.

Eileen has BECOME a dog monster.
Henry has BECOME [Eileen] as well.

You know the title? Yeah, the whole story was bullshitted for this moment. I know it's unusual, but I'm kind of sad I have to explain it :'(

I believe that the last sentence meant to say 'He has become one as well' meaning, he has become a dog monster as well.. That's what I guess..

Unbelievably good fic. Cruel, unforgiving and mostly indescriminate mindfuckery, that's what we expect from Silent Hill, and you delivered. We eagerly crave more from you good writer.

Chiao

Nah, I really did mean "he has become as well", though I understand reader confusion about it.

It's good, but I'm having a little trouble sorting out what you were trying to convey in the last four lines. I don't know how to be specific without spoiling it for anyone who reads the reviews first... um...

I'll just say I was following along fine until I got to "he has become as well:"

Maybe there was a typo, or maybe what I think happened is what happened, but it's still a little confusing...