rate_review Reviews

I'm trying to be objective as a writer, but this was... painful to read. I couldn't even make it past the first chapter. A lot of it was the severe OOC behavior of the written characters. Even in an AU setting, they were grossly maligned.

I'm sorry, but I really have no desire to continue reading this story arc.

Why oh why is this fandom so full of vile fanfiction? I gotta tell you, though...this fic takes the cake as one of the worst SO:3 fics I've read in quite awhile. Seriously...why bother writing for the fandom if you're not even going to bother writing the characters' personalities properly?

I love the Alfay pairing with big hearts and flowers, so don't think I'm critisizing because of that. Fact is, this hurts me more because I do ship hard for the pairing. It's stories like this that make me wonder though...Are you playing the same game I am?

This is just bad.
Practically everyone here is out of character, especially Maria. You also need to work on your spelling and grammar.

I like this fic! I miss seeing new albel/fayt fics on here! I think his sign should be like two crimson swords crossed with a dragon in the background! That seems to fit him meh?

I liked it! Can't wait to see the next chapter, yeah?